Friday 26 January 2018

World War Two Life of a Nurse

Activity: Imagine that you are a nurse working on a large medical ship in WWII then finish the story.

One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you.. (My writing starts here) look around to see what's happening. You see fire coming from the other end of the ship and then you see a military ship coming closer and closer. You hear screaming from your patients and you dash inside to see what's wrong. Inside you see a doctor telling everyone that they need to evacuate the ship because our ship is under attack. A group of soldiers runs into the room and starts loading the patients onto stretchers before carrying them out the door you follow them and see them place the soldiers on the second smaller ship.

You run back to the room where the patients used to be and see the doctor still inside. He tells you to take medical supplies to the other ship. After a couple of loads, a soldier tells you to jump on because their leaving. You tell him to wait that you're just grabbing the last box but when you get it the evacuation ship has left.

You see a rowboat close by and grab hold of it before dragging it to the side of the boat and throwing it overboard. You carefully lower yourself down into it and start rowing, after what seems like months you finally wash up on a shore. You see a man standing in front of a flag holding something and then you realize what he's holding, a gun! You stick your hands up in the air but he fires anyway. The funny thing is when he fires a bunch of people set off running. Then it hits you the gun was to start a race, the man turns to you and you see the flag properly it's the NZ flag, your back home.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jack

    It's Allie here from the SLJ team!

    I really enjoyed reading your story, I like that you have set it out in paragraphs. This makes it so much easier to read. So well done.
    How dramatic! I was thinking that the whole thing was going to end badly when the man has a gun and he fires it. But I really like that you end it with it being a race.
    This was a great story to read Jack.

    Good luck with you new year at school. Thanks for being apart of the first Summer Learning Journey. We have all really enjoyed reading your posts over the summer. I hope that you have enjoyed it too.
    I am looking forward to coming to Paroa School to hand out certificates and prizes.
    Well done Jack and I will see you soon.

    Allie :)

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